Dear Minister of Education
I am a student from room 2, Burnham School .I am trying to convince you to not close the Burnham school. I am writing to complain about the Government's proposal to close the school.
The Government should not close our wonderful school because I feel safe at Burnham school.
Furthermore there is a fun tree to climb.
In addition we can run on the running lanes.
In conclusion I suggest that the Government should not close our cool school.
I look forward to hearing your reply.
Yours sincerely
Jacob D.
Jacob,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you used lots of linking words in your letter. I think it is great that you feel safe at our school.
I will do all I can to make sure our school stays open. I am sure that your letter will help too!
Keep up the great work.
Ms Keenan