Friday, September 28, 2012

Jacob's D Formal Letter to Minister of Education

Dear Minister of Education

I am a student from room 2, Burnham School .I am trying to convince you to not close the Burnham school. I am writing to complain about the Government's proposal to close the school.

The Government should not close our wonderful school because I feel safe at Burnham school.

Furthermore there is a fun tree to climb.

In addition we can run on the running lanes.

In conclusion I suggest that the Government should not close our cool school.

I look forward to hearing your reply.

Yours sincerely

Jacob D.

1 comment:

  1. Jacob,
    I like the way you used lots of linking words in your letter. I think it is great that you feel safe at our school.
    I will do all I can to make sure our school stays open. I am sure that your letter will help too!
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Keenan