Monday, August 11, 2014

The Accident

 One day I going to the shop to get chocolate cake with mum, dad and my sister.
 I saw an ugly old man with a mental stick . He was crossing the road.
 The ugly old man stepped onto the road in front of a car.
 Suddenly the car hit the brakes. The old man said watch where you are going !
Then a tow truck came out of no where. Next there were flames and smoke everywhere!

The old man said that was bad driving.

Taha Potiki- (Kotiro Actions)

Taha Potiki- ( Tama actions)

Tenei Matou

Words to Cultural Festival

Sunday, August 10, 2014

The Accident

This is writing activity helps the student to sequence their writing. The comic strip is used as a motivation to write his/story…  This is Gabe's interpretation of the pictures

One afternoon in the city it was very cold and people were shopping.

I saw an old man with a wooden walking stick. He was just about to cross a busy road.

The old man with a wooden stick walking stepped onto the busy road. He didn't look both ways and almost got knocked out !
 The old man didn't see the car but the car driver did see the old man.  The car driver slammed on his brakes, and the car almost did a drift.

We are tomorrow finishing off our writing, so stay tuned for the final caption…...