I was traveling through the forest when the car ran out of petrol. We had to camp for the night.
Then suddenly I saw a spooky castle. I went up closer. There was a swamp that had sharks and man eating crocodiles. At the front of the castle a big draw bridge with two big chains.The castle's door was big and heavy with a big rusty handle.
Great job at descriptive writing Peter! We liked how you said the castle was spooky and there was a swamp with sharks and even man-eating crocodiles! Some of us were scared. Miss Wild said she could see the castle and what it looked it in her head. Well done!
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