Yesterday we went to the pool. There were heaps of people. I got to see Kayla and I got to swim to the deep end. My mum got a little hot so she got out.Dad and I played for one more hour. Then we got out and we went home . It was such a fantastic day at the pool. I want to go again.
Wow, Lilly sounds like you had a good time at the pools with your Dad. You are lucky your Mum got in the pool at all, she doesn't usually go swimming.
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Hi Lilly
ReplyDeleteWhat a great job you did with your recount or your visit to the pool with your mum and dad. You spoke well and clearly enjoyed your day. It is a really good idea to use real life experiences to write and talk about it.
Well done!! :-D
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Hi Lill's
ReplyDeleteIt was a great story - I was very surprised that your Mum got into the pool!
Myra has watched your video quite a few times and loves seeing you 'on the computer' at your new school.
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Michelle and Myra
Lilly we loved hearing you read your story. I showed it to all the children in my class in Hong Kong. They loved it too.
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