Sunday, August 10, 2014

The Accident

This is writing activity helps the student to sequence their writing. The comic strip is used as a motivation to write his/story…  This is Gabe's interpretation of the pictures

One afternoon in the city it was very cold and people were shopping.

I saw an old man with a wooden walking stick. He was just about to cross a busy road.

The old man with a wooden stick walking stepped onto the busy road. He didn't look both ways and almost got knocked out !
 The old man didn't see the car but the car driver did see the old man.  The car driver slammed on his brakes, and the car almost did a drift.

We are tomorrow finishing off our writing, so stay tuned for the final caption…...

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