As a part of our Narrative unit we are trying to improve our descriptive writing. Our goal is to improve our descriptive language to help the reader understand the setting.
I was traveling through a forest when there was a spooky castle in the distance. I wanted to get into the castle but there were sharks and the drawbridge was up.
“ Well , I have to Jump !”, I thought to myself .
I made it to the castle and put the drawbridge down to have a party!! I invited all my friends for a firework show also.