Sunday, June 10, 2012

Jacob’s D - Castle

As a part of our Narrative unit we are trying to improve our descriptive writing. Our goal is to improve our descriptive language to help the reader understand the setting.






I was traveling through a forest when there was a spooky castle in the distance. I wanted to get into the castle but there were sharks and the drawbridge was up.


“ Well , I have to Jump !”,  I thought to myself .


I made it to the castle and put the drawbridge down to have a party!! I invited all my friends for  a firework show also.

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