Monday, March 5, 2012

What is was it?

Room2 we set a challenge of writing about a cream bun. They weren’t able to informed the reader that it was about a cream bun but hopefully that the reader might guess that it maybe a cream bun by the clues given in their writing. A further instruction was that students had to hunt the cream bun like an animal.

I was standing there looking at it. I smelt it’s chocolate odour. It looked at me and it’s eye’s were rolling.

I sneaked up to it and hid behind the bench. I was worried that if I put my hand out to grab it, it would run away. However it just sat there doing nothing.

I grabbed it. I took a bite of it. It tasted so delicious!!! I decided to munch it all up.


  1. Wow what a great story. I love the idea of hunting for the cream bun. I will share this idea with my class and see if we can go hunting for something yummy too. :-)

  2. the creambun delicous thankyou mr thurlow