Amelie's Water Cycle Story

The Island

The island is called “ Blood Island”.

We were sailing towards the island. It was raining and lightening was appearing everywhere. We were very wet and cold.

We yelled, “ Fired”.

The smoke was coming from the island. I could see a wreck of a boat. We jumped into the freezing water and swum to shore where dead people and bones laid across the beach.

We found a treasure chest. We open the treasure chest.

Some pirates came out of their hiding place and started to fight us for the treasure. We killed them.

We wanted to take the treasure chest back to our boat. However the treasure chest was too heavy.

We put some gold coins into our pockets and sailed away.

Jacob’s D - Castle

As a part of our Narrative unit we are trying to improve our descriptive writing. Our goal is to improve our descriptive language to help the reader understand the setting.

I was traveling through a forest when there was a spooky castle in the distance. I wanted to get into the castle but there were sharks and the drawbridge was up.


“ Well , I have to Jump !”,  I thought to myself .


I made it to the castle and put the drawbridge down to have a party!! I invited all my friends for  a firework show also.

Sam’s Narrative

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