Futuristic Narrative- Whole class Writing.

Visitor From Outer Space

There was a glint in the sky as the clouds parted, as a silver bullet spaceship zoomed towards earth. The sonic boom woke me from my dreaming.Even Mr Thurlow stopped mumbling about narratives. Affront of Room 2 was covered in steam with the occasional sparks flying out from the steam cloud. There was a lot hissing and high pitch screaming.

Mr Thurlow just froze, except he was dribbling from his corner of his mouth. As I rushed towards the window I could see a dark shadow appearing for the space craft. It stood on the burnt grass and started coming towards me.

The aliens looked like green little monsters with antennae on it's head.They had wide googly-red eyes and creaky moaning voices. When the aliens moved, they moved on three gooey legs. When the aliens came closer they smelt revolting like pizza dipped in the sea.(These Ideas of the alien are Kalani's originally)




This is a on-going narrative- You are welcome to add onto our narrative by clinking on the link. This will get to a powerpoint, where
you can add to our narrative. Click here " Room 2 Narrative"

I will alter the narrative when people add something to the powerpoint.

Mr Thurlow