Monday, August 30, 2010

The fire dragon.

One day not so long ago there lived a lonely old fire dragon. He spent most of his day sleeping in a cave. The dragon heard a twinkly sound so he woke up. He saw a shining diamond. He was excited ,so he decided he must take it to the poor people. He disguised himself and went down along way to the poor people. When he got back to the cave he went back to sleep. From that day he always helped the poor people. But he didn't disguise himself again. On the dragon's birthday the poor people threw a big party. The poor people loved the dragon.
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  1. Room 2September 2, 2010 at 8:11 AM

    Hi Grace,

    I like how you have used your own original ideas for your narrative and it is written well. You next step for narrative written is to introduce a "problem", as this "hooks" in the reader to find out what is going to be the solution.

    Mr Thurlow

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