The next day he packed his bag's and set off on his way, to follow the instructions on the map until he found a rock wall.He forgot his lunch, so he went back to his cave and packed his lunch. Then he set off again to the rock wall and got his claws out and started to climb the wall. When he got to the top of the wall he found the x and dug it up and found diamonds.
After that, the dragon took the diamonds home and noticed that the diamonds were wishing diamonds. He decided to wish for a friend. The next day he went for a walk and found a small frog crying. The dragon asked the frog , " Do you want to be my friend ?"
The frog replied, " yes, please".
The dragon and the frog went back to the dragon's cave and had a cup of chocolate. They lived happily until the frog got stolen by a hunter. The dragon went after the hunter and got the frog after he had burnt the hunter's legs. The hunter ran away and never came back again.
What a wonderful story matthew and very well read. You are doing extremely well with your reading. Great art work to go with the story as well. Well done matthew.
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Hi Matthew,
ReplyDeleteI thought this narrative had a great structure and I enjoyed how you linked all your ideas together.
It is fantastic that you sounded so fluent when reading.
Next step is to look at more adjectives to match particular nouns.
eg: he packed his enormous lunch.
Mr Thurlow