The Trolley
Last night my mum and I went to the Vicarage for my mum’s friend Nicki’s birthday party. When we arrived I saw Miss Robinson and Jamie. Jamie and I played tug-a-war with a stick and I won. After a while we found a New World Shopping trolley. Jamie told me to push him, so I pushed him down the hill. He went so fast that he crashed into someone’s fence. Later on, he was pushing a different trolley because it was a larger trolley. The last one was 40 centimetres and the next one was 70 centimetres. Before long when it was nearly time to go, a rose bush got me with one of their spikes. When it happen I felt really awesome.
Laura,
ReplyDeleteI thought your use of connectives in you recount was fantastic, as this has been a focus in our writing. Mr Thurlow
What fun in the trolleys Laura, but I really feel for you with the rose thorn, deadly! Nice writing Laura. Granny Karen
ReplyDeleteI liked pushing Jamie in the tollry's because it was really funny when Jamie CRASHED.
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